Your love still echoes,somewhere inside my heart.
It haunts me every day & night.
It moistens my eyes,
never brings a smile,
though our days were undoubtedly the best.
I can only blame,
the fate-the silent snatcher.
Yet i am grateful that,
I was once, blessed with,
a goddess like mother.
Though like an illusion,
yet like a ripple of hope,
I shall wait for you,
to knock the door,
Until then every night ,
let me continue to pray,
that, your soul rest in peace.
17 comments:
a simple yet beautiful poem...
conveys the feelings quite beautifully...
keep up the good work!
dear....
wat can i say its jus beautiful.u have d talent 2 pen down ya feelings so beautifully.not everyone has it so keep up d good work. trust me u r blessed. god has surely somethin gr8 in store 4 u.
yours
devika:-)
Very moving..lucid poetry..well written..
Keep up the good work.Hope to see more of it.Let your work reflect the person you are..simple and beautiful..:-)
Reminds me of Metallica's mama said. Your's is a lot more pleasant than metallica's. It alerts me of the need to be a decent child to my mom
it awesome dear.
good keep it up.
the fairl there, Ur mother, would b t happiest person in heavn to hv such a loving daughter.
god bless u always
takes some time for reality to sink in...i din know about all these complications in your life...n inspite of the turmoil, you seem to have an eye for creativity n aesthetics...n the tolerance you show is humbling...
though am not very adept in commenting on poetry, this one's as lucid as it could get..n yet haunting...keep it up
prateek
really touching great...... kep it up dear.
gr8 work Arya. Keep it up. I liked ur poem very much.
D e p a l a n
ps. Who is Archana?.I visited her blog from ur site. She is an explosion!!.The kid is tremendous!!
hi dear, such a beautiful poem. really touching......
out of words to appreciate....loud round of applause .
i am missing words to comment..
Aru..
After long time again I came back to read your line's...
Aru
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