When life is a game,
When life is a big competition,
When life is all about "making money",
I am lost in the race.
When life is "family or friends?"
When life is "hell or betray?"
When life is "love or responsibility?"
I am lost between choice.
When life is "classmates, not friends",
When life is "noise, not music",
When life is "smile, not a hug",
I am there, but lost, inspite of the crowd.
5 comments:
wow gal!..and i really mean wow!..you've brought out the usual "being lost in a crowd" idea wonderfully!..to not be part of the same old rat race is what everyone aspires for...and your way of expressing that aspiration is excellent..really liked it!!
nice little poem! like your thoughts in it, kid!
jus in simple words u ve expressed ur thoughts and feelings.too good.
now u ve one alternate job.
u can be a composer !!!
ok gal..:) i remember this day...:) we spoke abt almost everything... :) now i am lost!!!
-Nice !!!
The more I am trying know you ..your bring more surprise ..
tc..
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